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Phil
2 ReviewsA stupid general makes a stupid plan for a near-impossible mission.
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The Trachian Wars
(#) Mary1618 2007-03-27 06:15:49 PM
WOW!!! HAHA!! i mean it was funny in all but, dont u think that was kind of harsh? -
The Trachian Wars
(#) Marie 2007-03-28 07:18:35 PM
i must say sean, your imagination, knowledge of proper battle criterian, behavior, and logic is quite impressive. i think u already told me but were any of your immediate family members in the military? aside from the profesional mumbo jumbo i thought that the part with you and the ladies and the part that talked about you and jack's view of phil's albino appearance and ferrit like hair was very funny especially since i know the inside joke to it all. GOOD STORY! or at least so far. :) send me the next chapter soon, i'm interrested in what happens next!