by Celestria
3 Reviews Troi and EmotionChip!Data
Category: Star Trek: The Next Generation -
Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Horror, Sci-fi - Characters: -
Published: 2005/10/12 - Updated: 2005/10/13 - 267 words - Complete
Reviews
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I love the premise, but the story seems blown out of proportion, and the intro is a bit stylistically clumsy. Good job, though.
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(#) Tikatu 2006-02-04 08:46:06 PM
A sweet little vignette that could really have happened as Data experimented with the emotion chip. Nice and tight, needs nothing else. Good job!
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(#) Ithilwen 2006-03-19 05:45:01 PM
Perhaps if it were a bit clearer exactly how the popcorn got into his hair...