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world war I

one afternoon

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar, Frank Iero, Gerard Way, Mikey Way, Ray Toro - Published: 2007/04/04 - Updated: 2007/04/04 - 621 words - Complete

Reviews

• you can keep my brother

  (#) MCR_dynamite 2007-04-04 09:03:11 AM

  I really like this story. Keep going!

• you can keep my brother

  (#) jerseygirlxx 2007-04-08 01:52:23 PM

  Good story. Dont forget to CAPITALIZE! It would make the story easier to read. And dontbe afriad to overdescribe things, some parts seem to go too fast

  Author's response

  fair enough. I'll fix the capitalization thing right now but i'm not sure about describing things, sometimes i read stories that describes every little thing and I find that annoying so I kinda walked on the safe side here.
  oh and I'm glad you liked my story because I read your opinion on fan fiction in general and how you think it's a bit unrealistic so thank you!!

• you can keep my brother

  (#) Lt. 2007-04-27 07:26:18 PM

  this story is turning out rli rli good.. ty for writing it, u r making my day

  Author's response

  and you're making MY day:))

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