(#) crys_within_816 2007-04-08oh my lordd!!
i just read it all, and i have to tell you... this is one of the best things that i have ever read in my life! a few typos but that understandable.. you're such a good writer im telling you!! especially how you used real life events made it so much more real to me.. sheesh this story made me thing that i would never find love. =(
but one thing i have to say... too many sex scenes.. and i think that they should be more... well normal, not so sure how to explain it but.. yeah..
gosh, i love everything.. for a few chapters i thought that ray was gay. haha that rhymed. lol MV.
i can't wait for an update!! i'll be waiting.
Author's responseThanks for the review. Don't give up on finding true love, of course it won't be like a romance story but if you are lucky it will be close. There is no such thing as the perfect man (or woman for that matter. Sorry you feel there are too many sex scenes, I've often thought if I had more time I could post the regular chapter and then the same chapter in the "clean" version without the sex but I don't have enough hours in the day. Anyway thanks for reading, I hope you continue to like the story.
(#) zaberdeenz 2007-04-09i love catcher in the rye! so huuge yay for you writing that in.
i also love every new chapter, there's always so much stuff innit, its really amazing. all this fucking drama with Jenn is slowly driving me nuts you know. but of course, that only good thing. Gees last line was pretty amusing.^__^ keep it coming.
Author's responseIt is a great book and it really is his favorite. Keep on hating Jenn she really deserves it!!
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