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No More Make-Up

by XxkelseyxX 2 Reviews

thanks for your reviews two readers. haha i update every week night almost. read review rate. even suggest ideas if you want you will get credited. warning short chapter..

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Drama - Characters: Gerard Way - Published: 2007/04/12 - Updated: 2007/04/13 - 393 words - Complete

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  • I'll never let him hurt you, I promise

    (#) WynonaKing90 2007-04-12 09:27:13 PM

    are you telling me gerard walked in on her NAKED in the fucking shower...and thats the best you can do??? or did i read it wrong? ha ha...i really do love your story. i wish you had made the chapter longer, though =(.
  • I'll never let him hurt you, I promise

    (#) jerseygirlxx 2007-04-13 10:15:18 AM

    wynona get your mind out of the gutter! Just kidding! (I know what you mean though- naked girl in the shower..Gerard picks the lock... hmmm... now that sounds like a story!)HA! no seriously this was a really great scene. But Ive gotta say I was proud of her at the end saying for saying how shes gonna let the world know his secret but I know for a fact the shame in covering for a guy like that...and its not that easily overcome... I wouldnt be surprised if she puts the make-up on later. And shes gonna have serious issues getting close to Gerard. I mean I doubt the first date she went on with Frank he slapped her around. You know its usually after you start trusting in the guy that he shows his true colors... Gerard sure has his work cut out for him...--keep writing -xoxo

    Author's response

    keep in mind they are mature adults. haha.

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