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• Left my heart between the waves

  (#) fruit_addict 2007-05-23

  good poem. I think the format was a little weird... some of the lines seemed cut off and should have been with the line above it. The poem didn't seem like it ended well either, seemed cut off. Good topic and theme though

• Left my heart between the waves

  (#) fruit_addict 2007-06-26

  nice poem. I think the end makes it sound a bit unfinished. But very good

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