Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > I'll never let him hurt you, I promise
A Rough Delivery
7 Reviewsrawrrr...uhm thanks to jerseygirlxx for somewhat getting me out of my writers blockk.. read rate review i say!!
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I'll never let him hurt you, I promise
(#) clutsy_93 2007-04-15 01:19:00 AM
this story is getting better and better, keep up the good work :D -
I'll never let him hurt you, I promise
(#) clutsy_93 2007-04-15 01:19:14 AM
this story keeps getting better and better, keep up the good work :D -
I'll never let him hurt you, I promise
(#) clutsy_93 2007-04-15 01:19:27 AM
this story keeps getting better and better, keep up the good work :D -
I'll never let him hurt you, I promise
(#) magstamonkii 2007-04-15 02:10:42 AM
wow.
AWW, FRANKIE CANT BE BAD!HE CANT BE! AHH NOOOOOOOO..... :'(
love the story though, very original! loved it xD -
I'll never let him hurt you, I promise
(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-04-15 07:19:48 AM
Ooooh! that was good. I like how you alternate between G and E. And its a different scene they each experience- not just the same scene from 2 different povs. I dont like the asterick though. You should make a new chapter when you switch. Even if its a short chapter. --xoxo -
I'll never let him hurt you, I promise
(#) Teresa 2007-04-15 03:44:46 PM
you really need to update that was really good.
keep going because what you have got so far is great, i also like the way you keep swapping thoughts that a really good idea. update soon