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First Impression
9 reviewsThe Templar have come out of the shadows. The battle between light and dark now takes on a new look. Conspiracy, betrayal, and a decent helping of buttkicking all around. HarryFluer in later chapte...
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Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) Nautilus 2007-04-16
nicely done. i thought the beginning of this chapter was bit slow, but the ending was good. will he fight moody too, of just surrender.
why is fleur sick? and where do you plan to take it from here? need more background information of these new 'tribe' of people. cheers.Author's response
Yes there hasn't been much action lately but rest I promise after the next to chapters there will be that nice helping of butt kicking that I promised. As for Fleur's sickness, lets just say it was indigestion or something. Her illness wasn't really important. As for background information on the "tribe". Well, that is part of the conspiracy and is meant to keep you guessing. All will be revealed in due time.Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) irishfighter 2007-04-16
cool chapter, please update again soon.Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) koppe 2007-04-18
Great so far, please update soon.
I looking forward to Harry and Fleur getting together - hope it won't hurt Bill too much though.
Will he enrole at Hogwarts to continue, thus (probably) having his true identity discovered (which I guess he doesn't even knoe himself)?
I love the way you've buildt up the templars, and look forward to learning more of their ranks and history.
Keep up the good work.Author's response
Your right, Jericho doesn't know that he is Harry Potter right now. He will learn, but not for quite a while. I cant answer yes or no to any of your other questions or thoughts since that would spoil the story. More information on the Templar will be released on Friday with Chapter 5.Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) maluss 2007-04-18
Like the story. "Fun facts" would be interesting, but they probably arn't nessecary. Cant wait for the next update.Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) Clayva 2008-11-01
Since I am only now after 16 chapters finding you I shall only review in multiples of 4 chapters until I catch up. You seem to have a very unique story here. I read a lot of this fiction and have yet to see one with this AU view of Harry to say nothing of his friends. The story is very well written and I am enjoying these first 4 chapters. You will hear from me again after chapter 8. Carol Layland, retired English Composition/History Teacher.Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar
(#) Gauis_Iulus_Romanus 2013-03-30
You do know that the Templars died out after helping Robert the Bruce right?
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