Harry solidifies his relationships, personal and professional, readies for the final confrontation
(#) glazedlookineyes101 2007-04-18 09:21:46 AMMoan I was expecting them to arrive at the Burrow in this chapter! It seems like that confrontation keeps getting put off! Oh well, at least they (Harry, Marietta, Bella, and Myrtle) are now married and have their first child (adopted but it's good that the baby has a chance to grow up loved and happy).
I hope that it won't be JUST four chapters left. Like you said there is a lot of loose end left to resolve so I hope to see them resolved and an epilogue please.
Great work and I am VERY anxiously waiting for this weekend to come.
Author's responseThank you, as always, for reading and reviewing. I call adopted children lucky, because they were chosen, they didn't just happen. I've fleshed out four more chapters, but will revise them right up untill the time they're posted.
(#) glazedlookineyes101 2007-04-18 09:55:44 AMI forgot to add this to my last review, sorry. I think that whoever is going to read this chapter will be very, very anxious once they read this line:
"My lord husband," Belle said after they had all kissed to complete the ritual, "there is one more you need to ask."
You just set off a big box of fireworks with that one line, did you know that? I remember that in one of your review replies you wrote that you are a Harry/Hermione shipper. However, I also remember that in another review reply you wrote that "Harry has a thing for redheads" when the person asked for Ginny to be included in Harry's family.
Darn it, which will it be!?! The ex-girlfriend, the best friend, the one too young to be married (Gabrielle), or an unknown girl (no way will I dismiss this notion after you pulled the whole Myrtle thing on us)!
You truly are masterful at keeping your readers in suspense. So much so that I think you should add Suspense for the listing of what Genre this fic is under!
Also, lol, I seriously did not notice that my review for the last chapter was so long that it was longer than your prologue. I hope that you enjoyed reading it though.
ROFLMAO, Harry's son peed on him! How classic!
I Love happy endings! I really hope Hermione AND Ginny gets together with Harry!
Author's responseAs always, thank you for reading and reviewing. You know I like to say "ask me no questions and I'll tell you no spoilers. . ."
I think you'll like the ending though.
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-04-18 11:01:45 AMOK that was a cute little chapter and well done on the marriage. I'm still ever so curious as to what the Weasley reaction will be to the marital status of Mr. Potter. In addition, you have Neville to consider as well as the Dark Mark reaction to Voldemort's death. Compounding it with whether Snape will seek out to have his mark removed as well as Harry's willingness to remove it. I love your idea with utilizing the ghosts to counteract the Inferi. I would suggest a trap for the werewolves at St Mungo's involving powdered silver as a means for defense, however you will have to work out a delivery method. As far as your ultravoilet defense to battle Dementors, Hand crank batteries like the ones used by the US Army during Vietnam error for communication would be more idea and would be chargable in a magical field. That or utilizing insulation to ward against EMP.
Food for thought. Now crank out another. :)
- Another Gerat Chapter But That Was Expected. And You Had Me Asking Why Would Belle Turn Harry Down Even Though It Was Not The Best Preposal.Now For The Handfasting.... Brilliant Does This Mean Harry Can Still Marry Hermi...I mean Can Harry Still Marry The Unnamed Witch Waiting For Him At The Burrow? Anyhow With The Adoption I Thought You Would Have Harry & Myrtle Claim Him Beacause She Couldn't Have Children With Harry. OH..Yeah SNAPE Why Would You Do That Now Harry Can't Kill The Greasy Git...O Well Time To RANT A Little Does Anyone Pay Attention To What They Read I mean H/HR Could Have Conversations Without Speaking During Second Year Not To Mention That When Hermione Was Released From The Hospital She Ran To Harry Screaming You Solved It With NO Mention Of Ron..Fourth Year...Need I Say More.Fith Year Hermione WAS Harry's Girlfriend If You Don't Belive Me Read The Book Again And Pay Attention To The Harry/Hermione Moments Like After They Visit Grawp.And After The Snake Attack.Sixth Year Before The Amorentia Harry & Hermione Couldn't Stop Complementing Each Other. And After Dumbledore Was Killed Who Did Hermione Instantly Run To? And Now The Big Question.Does Anyone Think That If Hermione Wasn't Insecure About Herself Would She Settle For Ron?
Author's responseThank you for reading and reviewing. I agree with you 100% concerning Ron and Hermione, and anyone who doesn't see that she and Harry belong together is delusional IMHO.
(#) twilliams1797 2007-04-19 11:25:03 PMwhoever rates this story as a train wreck is a damfool™. this story has from the start been innovative and interesting, if someone wants to read another rehash of cliches, plug in the names of their favorite ship, then sobeit go and read thaqt story, I for one am looking for interesting plots and interesting characterisation, and maybe even something a little different.
like this story.
Author's responseThank you, as always, for reading and reviewing. And especially thank you for voicing my opinion. Life it too short to waste time on bad fiction. I try to write the good stuff, if I fall short it's not for lack of trying.
For the record, I welcome constructive criticism. If all I want to see is "good job" then I'll just share the story with my closest friends and family. If something needs improvement, let me know, I may not agree with you but I welcome your opinions.