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The Diversion

The Templar have come out of the shadows. The battle between light and dark now takes on a new look. Conspiracy, betrayal, and a decent helping of buttkicking all around. HarryFleur in later chapte...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama - Characters: Dumbledore, Fleur, Harry, Molly Weasley, Moody, Sirius - Warnings: [!] [?] [V] - Published: 2007/04/21 - Updated: 2007/04/22 - 2866 words

Reviews

• Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar

  (#) snowman 2007-04-21 05:25:23 PM

  Nice job.

• Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar

  (#) sweetgirl 2007-04-21 08:31:34 PM

  Great chapter. I like the fight scene. Loved the way he told off Molly Weasley. This is becoming one of my favorites. Keep up the good work.

  Author's response

  Thank you very much for the kind words. I hope I continue to make the story enjoyable for you. =)

• Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar

  (#) JVTazz 2007-04-21 10:20:04 PM

  cute request for reviews heh
  good chapter :)

  Author's response

  hehe seems to be working a little bit. Thanks for the compliments =)

• Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar

  (#) Cateagle 2007-04-22 12:11:05 AM

  Oh, my!! It definitely looks like quite the intense diversion; I can't wait to see what/where the real attack was.

  Author's response

  Hopefully you'll like the next chapter. As I said in the AN its nothing but the OC's so you'll love it or hate it.
  
  Hopefully though, Marcell and Amadues make fans in the next chapter. Thats one of the goals I have set for the next chapter.

• Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar

  (#) Skoell 2007-04-22 05:32:42 AM

  can't rate any more of the good things...
  
  nice chapter! good fight, even without his advantage harry still was creative enough to make his stand! good ideas for fighting!

  Author's response

  Im glad you think so. I was a little afraid my readers would still think Harry was overpowered. I tried to come up with believable means for him to fight so well while still putting a damper on him

• Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-04-24 09:32:19 AM

  Good story, can't wait to read more.
  
  gunny

• Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-04-24 09:32:44 AM

  Good story, can't wait to read more.
  
  gunny

• Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-04-24 09:52:26 AM

  Good story, can't wait to read more.
  
  gunny

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