The Templar have come out of the shadows. The battle between light and dark now takes on a new look. Conspiracy, betrayal, and a decent helping of buttkicking all around. HarryFleur in later chapte...
- Great chapter. I like the fight scene. Loved the way he told off Molly Weasley. This is becoming one of my favorites. Keep up the good work.
Author's responseThank you very much for the kind words. I hope I continue to make the story enjoyable for you. =)
- Oh, my!! It definitely looks like quite the intense diversion; I can't wait to see what/where the real attack was.
Author's responseHopefully you'll like the next chapter. As I said in the AN its nothing but the OC's so you'll love it or hate it.
Hopefully though, Marcell and Amadues make fans in the next chapter. Thats one of the goals I have set for the next chapter.
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nice chapter! good fight, even without his advantage harry still was creative enough to make his stand! good ideas for fighting!
Author's responseIm glad you think so. I was a little afraid my readers would still think Harry was overpowered. I tried to come up with believable means for him to fight so well while still putting a damper on him