(#) whatkatydid 2007-04-27I rated this for Originality.
I think I'm just enjoying reading Pete in a different light, we all know how incurably romantic he (wants) to be and sometimes he comes across as deseperate for love. It's difficult to write a truthful portrayal of someone, who lets face it, we only know through his reactive journals to situations and events he goes through.
I would love to see Kayli's character come out more, like, really see her strengths because at the moment, her character mainly feeds of Pete.
I loved how she reacted to his proposal, I wasn't expecting that and it gave Pete ( and us ) to pee our pants a bit.
This story isn't getting enough credit on here. You're lucky you're more tolerant than I am. :)
Take Care Sweets
P.S Thank you for my shout out. It meant a lot, seriously.
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-04-27i agree with the previous review, it would be nice to go deeper into her existence. it seems like we're mostly getting his insight on the entire situation and not enough of hers. but i do enjoy his now growing apprehension with the entire "secret" situation. thats a nice consequence for him to come to terms with.
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