Rachel starts to have feelings she has never felt before...
(#) haily_grace 2007-05-06 10:57:01 PMhey nice story i just have to tell u to make the story i mean chapters longer cause the longer ur story goes the more reviews u will get from me and my friends i'll let them read ur story and let me just tell u how my friend nina loves romance!! she like reads every story and comments 5 or 6 reviews in each chapter and if every chapter has romance and making love in it she'll review mostly every and i mean every chapter u make!!! i really mean that!!!
Author's responsewell thank you for your honisty. i appreciate it alot. i will let you in on a secret for you and you friend nina, it will involve romance, but theres going to be a, sort of twist that doesnt really involve romance, but brings Rachel and Gerard closer. im not really sure if i still want to put it in or not. but i can guarantee that theres gonna be some love making in it!!
and a note to nina, i LOVE romance as well!! thank you again, and i'll try to make the chapters longer...
- wow, I cant wait to see whats going to happen, I hope he kisses her first lol
please post more soon!
Author's responseits nice to see you have kept interest in my story! i didnt actually expect to get reviews at all!! i hope you enjoy the next chapter.