The aftermath of the robbery
it was heart-wrinching. It made me cry. Great chapter.
Well, I must say I'm glad I read the complete chapter. It was good before (with half missing) but it's even better now. Still think everyone needs hugs!
Wow I seriously got teary =[
Your amazing, you know that? You have a new chapter almost every day and I admire the dedication you put into this story. It was never boring, fake, cliche, none of that. I look foward to each chapter you bring
(#) icyblue858 2007-05-12 10:59:56 PM
Loved it one of my favs so far!
(#) zaberdeenz 2007-05-13 07:26:39 AM
how many times are you gonna make me all teary-eye? wipes tears
that was heartbreaking and beautiful. thats nuff said bout that.sits back to wait some more of this
Geezo, they've had a tough time! Loved that chapter, was also nearly crying, Poor Mikey! :(