(#) prissynblack 2007-05-14OMG! this is getting so good and once again a well written chapter! I feel so bad for melody. it hurts to hear your mom dog you out. I so feel for her even though shes a non-fictional character! Brendon is such a...i dont know thw ord for it but well everything isnt his fault beczu if they really were ryans friend they wanted have gone along with him. even if it did hurt him. This story is amazing. pLz update. this was really good!
- Oh my jesus tapdancing christ. That was unbelievable. Woman, if you don't update for another week, I think I'll die! Thank you SO much for the dedication...I was totally having an emo day, and that just made me so much happier. :)
I love how the last chapter flowed into this one...I can now really see Melody's side of the story, and not just Panic!'s. It's like you're really making every character and every nook and cranny become full circle-- you take everything into accountance.
Despite the fact that you said I always have something to say that's good and bad, I believe I don't have anything 'constructive criticism-like' to add now. It's just too good!
PS The song (if you haven't heard or seen the new music vid that popped out today) that came into my head while reading this is "Misery Business" by Paramore. (Might apply to Brendon + Ryan later on?...)
Author's responsetotally used it in the summary for this chapter and perhaps more later on...thanks for suggesting it!
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