Just how far will Miroku go to save the woman he loves? [Miroku/Sango One-Shot] Winner 2nd Place at iyfic_contest LJ community, Week #32, Theme: Faithful/Unfaithful.
- Hee. I can picture Miroku holding Sango and not trying any of his old tricks. The reason I can picture it is because you've shown us that no one was watching.
His hand was "racked" with pain, as in "put on the midieval torture device called the 'rack,'" not "wracked."
Touching, especially "I am finished."
- I liked this. It was a very original story. As funny as Miroku's womanizing can be, I always viewed it with a sort of sadness. "Will you bear my child?", to me, was always the desperate hope of a man who knew that he would die young, and wanted something to survive him. This story reminded me of that all over again.
Author\'s Response: Thank you very much for your review. It is always a nice surprise to get a review on an older story.
Amazing job. I loved it, you had me very emotionally invovled in the story... I almost teared up when I picture Sango clinging to Miroku desparately, like I know she would. Very cannon. Very nice.
I also liked how it wasn't you basic "lalala rainbows and butterflies" Mirosan fic. Made it very real.
Author's responseThank you very much.
(#) crazy_reviewer 2006-09-04 01:51:43 AMI can honestly say, I am sobbing right now, I can not tell you how good that was, and just how beautiful, well-written, and it was so...there are no words to describe, it was just so emotional, and real I only hope that that is not what actually happens in the show/manga, because if it did, oh my gosh I would be so upset for Sango and all of the others. This really moved me and I have only just stopped crying.