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The Final Darkness

Just how far will Miroku go to save the woman he loves? [Miroku/Sango One-Shot] Winner 2nd Place at iyfic_contest LJ community, Week #32, Theme: Faithful/Unfaithful.

Category: Inuyasha - Rating: R - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters: Inuyasha, Miroku, Sango - Warnings: [X] - Published: 2005/11/15 - Updated: 2005/11/15 - 2171 words - Complete

Reviews

• The Final Darkness

  (#) k-chan14 2005-11-16 01:28:12 PM

  Nice story, I had never actually read one about Miroku getting sucked into his wind tunnel so I gave it an original. I thought it was written really well, great job.
  
  
  
  Author\'s Response: Thank you very much. Glad you liked it.

• The Final Darkness

  (#) mirsanforever 2005-11-22 05:44:49 AM

  wow.... could ya have made it any sadder! you could have at least made it a terrible nightmare!

• The Final Darkness

  (#) Ithilwen 2005-11-23 03:50:17 PM

  Hee. I can picture Miroku holding Sango and not trying any of his old tricks. The reason I can picture it is because you've shown us that no one was watching.
  
  His hand was "racked" with pain, as in "put on the midieval torture device called the 'rack,'" not "wracked."
  
  Touching, especially "I am finished."

• The Final Darkness

  (#) shiromori 2006-03-24 10:30:12 AM

  I liked this. It was a very original story. As funny as Miroku's womanizing can be, I always viewed it with a sort of sadness. "Will you bear my child?", to me, was always the desperate hope of a man who knew that he would die young, and wanted something to survive him. This story reminded me of that all over again.
  
  
  
  Author\'s Response: Thank you very much for your review. It is always a nice surprise to get a review on an older story.

• The Final Darkness

  (#) uppsydaisy 2006-03-29 07:54:36 PM

  Very thoughtful and thought-provoking. This was very well-written and very sad as well. Worth a read.
  
  
  
  Author\'s Response: Thanks for reading.

• The Final Darkness

  (#) Maginox 2006-07-11 06:46:44 PM

  Wow.
  
  Wow.
  
  Amazing job. I loved it, you had me very emotionally invovled in the story... I almost teared up when I picture Sango clinging to Miroku desparately, like I know she would. Very cannon. Very nice.
  
  I also liked how it wasn't you basic "lalala rainbows and butterflies" Mirosan fic. Made it very real.

  Author's response

  Thank you very much.

• The Final Darkness

  (#) crazy_reviewer 2006-09-04 01:51:43 AM

  I can honestly say, I am sobbing right now, I can not tell you how good that was, and just how beautiful, well-written, and it was so...there are no words to describe, it was just so emotional, and real I only hope that that is not what actually happens in the show/manga, because if it did, oh my gosh I would be so upset for Sango and all of the others. This really moved me and I have only just stopped crying.

• The Final Darkness

  (#) Loz_Luvs_Shaun4eva 2006-12-05 12:25:13 AM

  this story is so sad it shows how much Miroku and Sango care for each other and that Sango is willing to give up her life just so she can be with Him thats an awsome story

• The Final Darkness

  (#) XJaideX 2007-01-11 11:03:53 PM

  Wonderful loved it, very sad in the end.

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