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Screams

After the war ends, Neville is visited by a friend he thought dead. An experiment in a darker style of writing by the author. Feedback appreciated. One shot. DARK FIC! DARK/EVIL HE...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Horror - Characters: Hermione, Neville - Warnings: [!!] [R] [V] - Published: 2007/05/20 - Updated: 2007/05/20 - 2324 words - Complete

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  (#) koppe 2007-05-21 12:22:12 AM

  Great story. Very dark though. Wouldn't mind stories detailing what Hermione describes.

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  (#) koppe 2007-05-21 12:23:53 AM

  Great story. Very dark though. Wouldn't mind stories detailing what Hermione describes.

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  (#) Marine_Ruphert 2007-05-21 01:47:55 AM

  nice. Very interesting. I like how you didn't pussy foot around it.

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  (#) Cateagle 2007-05-21 05:21:29 PM

  Most sadred excrement!! Neville is one of the last I'd expect to turn on them, but I guess everyone has a weakpoint that can be worked and his was revenge. I do hope what he gained was worth it as he's most definitely about to pay dearly for his shot at Bellatrix.
  
  Very moody and well-done story.

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  (#) ZanyMuggle 2007-05-21 11:03:28 PM

  Very interesting work. Harry and Hermione = Tom and Bella the Next Generation. You wrote the mood and dialog very well. I had never heard a believable Neville-betrayal idea before, so kudos for that.

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  (#) BenRG 2007-05-22 02:48:05 AM

  Ooh! Ouch! That was really dark. A great job though.
  
  You did very well at portraying Hermione as someone who has gone beyond madness to that strange place that only the most evil people exist. It is, of course, a tribute to the essential nature of Harry and Hermione in that they have restrained indulging their appetites to those who are deserving. How long that will continue remains to be seen. After all, once they have run out of enemies, where will Harry find the screams he needs to keep Hermione functioning?
  
  A nice original touch by making Neville the betrayer. We all have that little bit of Slytherin in us, it seems, even the least likely of souls.
  
  Overall a gripping story full of atmosphere that keeps you reading. Well worth reading. Well done!
  
  BenRG's Rating: 9/10

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  (#) papamidnite 2007-05-22 06:34:32 PM

  I love it nice ending

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  (#) sapph 2007-05-23 01:32:24 PM

  Nice, not read that many oneshots I wished had a sequel, you should make one for this.

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  (#) carvell 2007-05-25 02:49:08 PM

  This was brillent, such rare as it is to read a dark hermione story this was quite refreshing to read compleatlry origional and dam right dark 5/5.
  
  any chance of an epilog of neviles screams....?

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  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-05-25 07:30:08 PM

  Ok that was a bit over the top. Good for a one shot but can you do a whole story?

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