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Never Forget

He hoped Al would never remember. He deserved to forget that night. To live in ignorant bliss. He was so very deserving of the ignorance a new start could give him. Ignorance of what Ed could never...

Category: Full Metal Alchemist - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters: Edward Elric, Roy Mustang - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2007/05/21 - Updated: 2007/05/21 - 1460 words - Complete

Reviews

• Never Forget

  (#) Beregond5 2007-06-29 02:50:35 PM

  I'll be honest, I wasn't sure what to expect when I started reading this. However, the end result was nice and some parts were even heart-stirring. My favourite part would have to be the love-scene, probably because it was told through the emotions of characters - Ed's in this case. And the final few sentences were just right to point out his agony.
  
  One thing that I found a bit needless were the many abrupt sentences, even to the point of missing the subject (he, Roy, whatever). Maybe it was just me but, though I felt it worked incredibly well towards the end of the story because it showed the tension and the sadness, I would have preferred the first few parts to have a smoother pace.
  
  Still, as I said, you did a good job on this. Keep it up. :)

• Never Forget

  (#) Inudork08 2007-07-06 11:30:42 PM

  W...T...F....U could've said it was FRICKIN YAOI!

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