(#) iheartyou07 2007-05-21This was a really good first oneshot! I'll read anything that has to do with AT, so this was awesome. Although I would have loved some more action:P One thing though, where did Jay fit into all of this? Is Theresa over him? Did something happen? Just something to expand on. Other than that, it was great! Keep up the great work, and I'm hoping to see some more stuff from you up here soon!
- Awwwww...... lol too cute man!!!!! Hee hee hee I'm glad Archie got over Atlanta..... But what about Theresa's feelings???? And Jay's??? lol That's a very unsubtle hint for you to do more one-shots!!!!!!!! lmao ANywho enjoy n hope this review brought a little smile to your face!!!! ;P
Love ya stax mwah
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(#) story_master 2007-05-22Hey!
Awsome one shot. Definitely a fav! Constructive crit, eh? Ummm, I guess the only thing would be some grammer/spelling- but I blame that one word processing programs ;P. And maybe a little more description. Although, I thought it was perfect the way it was. Awsome job! I'd love to see a sequel out there- if you feel like writing one. Amazing job once again- I just love that couple now! Though still a huge fan of J/T and A/A. Cheers!
- lol aw that wasn't a sad attempt, that was cute! especially the tickling part, and the chocolate ice cream eating archie XD so since this story was so cute and fluffy, but without any real overt kissy kissy fluff between them, I demand you write another one to satisfy my craving! and everyone elses, of course XD looking forward to it!!
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