well this poem is dark but heyy why not?
(#) xXlifesapartyXx 2007-07-18 08:13:44 PMdude..
that can totally be made into a song...
just use 'Crows will carry souls,
as they will do to mine,
Razors letting me bleed,
this is no want,it is my need.'
that as the chorus...
and put it before the long verse...
and its a song..
it sounds like something me and my friends would play...