Anger, violence, bad language and shounen ai. All the good stuff. Reincarnation story, of sorts. Wild Adapter crossover.
(#) Forst 2005-12-01 06:46:09 PMFlip.
I have no idea why there are no other reviews for this story. This is lovely. This is also my first time on FicWad, and I pull up such a lovely story- definityly better then the Pit of Voles.
Why did I like this so much?
You can write well. I can't quantify that very much beyond a good handle on english grammer and spelling, but it has a good bit to do with pacing and description and good reactions and jazz like that. There were a few unclear phrases (mostly could have used a word inserted or moved, the like) but that's nitpicking. Was this beta'd? It's wonderfull eaither way, but one would hope a beta would pick up those bits of phraseology.
That all said: I loved this. ^_^