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The Smiling Man

by cloneserpents 10 Reviews

Fugitives Draco and Ginny try to find a place to hide in the "Screams" universe. Post HBP DARK FIC

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Horror - Characters: Draco, Ginny, Harry, Hermione - Warnings: [!!] [V] [X] - Published: 2007/06/01 - Updated: 2007/06/01 - 7133 words - Complete

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  • The Smiling Man

    (#) G 2007-06-01 06:42:10 AM

    Loved it! Though still kind of missing the details.. My mind is working overtime trying to imagine what happened to Harry and Hermione and what they've done to others.
  • The Smiling Man

    (#) hoser41 2007-06-01 08:01:40 PM

    This has got to be one of the most amazingly disturbing shorts that I have ever read. Its very well written and the imagery is amazing.
  • The Smiling Man

    (#) BenRG 2007-06-02 05:32:43 AM

    So, Harry is the Wizarding World's equivalent of The Joker. It is pretty clear that he and Hermione have both gone off the deep end. Given what they have suffered, who could blame them?

    I wonder if Hermione might deny that they had psychologically tortured Ginny but, instead, that they had simply told her the punchline of the Big Joke.

    Another chilling but effective work. Well done!

    BenRG's Rating: 9/10
  • The Smiling Man

    (#) Dain Bread 2007-06-04 10:09:09 PM

    Ah. This is purely awesome. I hate Draco and I can't tolerate Ginslut. Thank you for making my day. Oh, I like The Sword of Gryffindor too. Hilarious.
  • The Smiling Man

    (#) Triggerbox 2007-06-05 10:05:33 AM

    I like your humor fic, but I absolutely love your two scream fics. While I saw where you were heading with this fic a mile away I still enjoyed reading it. Some people will probably complain that you didn't go into detail about the tortures but to tell you the truth I think it reads better without it. Look forward to more, hopefully soon.
  • The Smiling Man

    (#) Triggerbox 2007-06-05 10:06:27 AM

    I like your humor fic, but I absolutely love your two scream fics. While I saw where you were heading with this fic a mile away I still enjoyed reading it. Some people will probably complain that you didn't go into detail about the tortures but to tell you the truth I think it reads better without it. Look forward to more, hopefully soon.
  • The Smiling Man

    (#) Cateagle 2007-07-17 07:32:54 PM

    Wince!! I do feel sorry for Ginny, but most certainly not for Malfoy. I doubt Ginny really didn't expect what she found at Neville's, nor that Neville had been the betrayer. She's suffering from what happened, but not as bad as Harry & Hermione.
  • The Smiling Man

    (#) grookill 2007-09-17 05:49:34 PM

    I like "Scream" better, simply because it was more focused. This was well done, and fits well though.

    I haven't made my mind up if I think the wizarding world could help Ginny. I think the muggle world could though, but it would be a LONG time doing so.
  • The Smiling Man

    (#) mr3vi1m0nk3y 2007-09-29 12:18:01 AM

    Loved this short. It seem to ramble a bit at the end when you were describing how it affected Ginny in the future, but other then that it was perfect.
    4.9/5
  • The Smiling Man

    (#) papamidnite 2008-01-16 11:49:56 PM

    Awesome Harry reminds me of the joker

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