Before a legendary sacrifice, the Yondaime made an unexpected request of a young Umino Iruka. Never did anyone imagine the consequences. AU, SasuNaru
(#) SooSeH 2005-05-06 03:55:56 PM
I Like The Story And I Hope U Continue The Good Work .... GooD LucK :)
Oh wow, the mood and descriptions in that were great! Very moving writing. Poor Yondaime... I love how... human you wrote him. The fact that he gets panicky over his wife and child... and then feels bad about it, since he's Hokage and has the entire village to think about...
It really got to me. Wonderful characterizations. A little off on the details in parts, but that's what artistic licence is for. :)
I hope you write more of this soon.
...wow...well written. one of the best one-shots I've ever read, and I usually don't even LIKE one-shots!!
(#) leviathan 2006-03-06 02:19:40 PM
oh...my... O_____O when I wandered onto this site I was NOT expecting to find a fic about this! well. WONDERFUL job, dear. incredibly poignant.
(#) Kkorat 2006-04-18 10:15:22 PM
I dearly hope you will continue this. I really like stories about Iruka taking care of Naruto from an early age.
(#) a_writer 2006-05-08 07:04:37 AM
Amazing! Such intensity! I like it.
(#) anime_aleah 2006-07-12 01:57:55 PM
That was so moving. You did a REALLY good job decribing the happenings of Konoha during the Nine Tailed fox demon's destruction. This was very moving. Great job. also increasingly sad at the same time.