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• Pirates Will be Pirates

  (#) Ithilwen 2007-06-04

  You're missing a question mark here and there and "Be" gets caps in title-style, but overall it seems to come through.
  
  Jack's impressions are most chortleworthy. Very nice after a day at work.
  
  "Whatnot" is one word.
  
  It's usually spelled, "Yeah." "Yea" is pronounced "yay" and is used in formal things like "Yea though I walk through the valley of death."
  
  "Pretty nice" doesn't sould too Willish to my ears.
  
  I can't really buy Jack allowing Will to blast the crud out of the Pearl right after he'd gotten it back, but it's worth a little "huh" at the end of the story to get that conversation. Funny.

• Pirates Will be Pirates

  (#) AimeeRose 2007-06-08

  A cute, short story. I liked the premise, but it was a bit choppy at parts. But you have some pretty funny lines interspersed with the story as well. Great job.

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