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Letting My Guard Down and Letting You Win

by indie_chicky 9 Reviews

Take the stage, take the lead. Don't be afraid. You're all I'm waiting for.

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: R - Genres: Drama, Romance - Characters:  - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2007/06/11 - Updated: 2007/06/11 - 2225 words

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  • Disheveled

    (#) xSoMeOnEx 2007-06-11 02:29:27 PM

    "When the sun has set on this charade
    Will we be friends (or enemies)?" i immediately knew it. Great clue.
    Pete loving porn, so hot and funny.
    I love how Ryan did the small treasure hunt. pretty fun. oh and Pete's phrase "Hey, kid. Don't break any hearts tonight."
    .
    loved the chapter and i'm so going to miss this story. its pretty good.
    i'm hoping after this one you do more.
    :)
  • Disheveled

    (#) jewsicax 2007-06-11 05:55:32 PM

    ok so pretty much i am dying in suspence
    ok that sentence didn't really work but whatever.
    i just am loving this story with everything i have
    and need to know what happens next.
    i really hope bren and ryan get together cause that would make me the happiest girl EVER.

    and i think you are an amazing writer, and youy do a follow up to this.
  • Disheveled

    (#) jewsicax 2007-06-11 05:56:49 PM

    ok so pretty much i am dying in suspence
    ok that sentence didn't really work but whatever.
    i just am loving this story with everything i have
    and need to know what happens next.
    i really hope bren and ryan get together cause that would make me the happiest girl EVER.

    and i think you are an amazing writer, and youy do a follow up to this.
  • Disheveled

    (#) jewsicax 2007-06-11 05:58:06 PM

    ok so pretty much i am dying in suspence
    ok that sentence didn't really work but whatever.
    i just am loving this story with everything i have
    and need to know what happens next.
    i really hope bren and ryan get together cause that would make me the happiest girl EVER.

    and i think you are an amazing writer, and youy do a follow up to this.
  • Disheveled

    (#) jewsicax 2007-06-11 05:59:49 PM

    ok so pretty much i am dying in suspence
    ok that sentence didn't really work but whatever.
    i just am loving this story with everything i have
    and need to know what happens next.
    i really hope bren and ryan get together cause that would make me the happiest girl EVER.

    and i think you are an amazing writer, and youy do a follow up to this.
  • Disheveled

    (#) trueLIEx3 2007-06-11 08:28:25 PM

    This is unbelieveably adorable. Ryan's getting him to tell everyone important his love for him. Awwwe!
  • Disheveled

    (#) kristina1 2007-06-12 12:31:03 AM

    wow love it keep going more soon please!!!
  • Disheveled

    (#) kristina1 2007-06-12 12:31:36 AM

    wow love it keep going more soon please!!!
  • Disheveled

    (#) Danishgirl9 2007-06-15 08:42:13 AM

    Will we be friends (or enemies)?
    Oh my Gosh, I litterally squeeked with laughter at that, friends or enemies =D hihi, I'm still laughing. But it was actually really clever thought of by you, I'm jealous that mind can't seem to think of clever plays on words like that one. Really fucking awesome.

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