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Wonder and Torture

Sometimes Naruto wonders. And just once, the Yondaime wondered as well.

Category: Naruto - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters: Naruto, Yondaime - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2007/06/13 - Updated: 2007/06/13 - 1208 words - Complete

Reviews

• Wonder and Torture

  (#) Rahzenshia 2007-06-29 12:18:52 PM

  This was really original. I haven't read a story like this before. I also liked your writing style. Keep up the good work! :)

• Wonder and Torture

  (#) IWCT 2008-01-10 11:26:22 AM

  Why can you write Naruto introspection so well? It just ain't fair. In character and yet thoughtful in a way we rarely ever see Naruto, and yet know is there. Anyway: 'Tis a thing of beauty.
  
  The darling Yondaime is a lot more ... focused than I've seen in similar fics. It fits, but he doesn't seem as positive in his outlook as others would put him. Here he's more like a do-your-duty-and-die type person. I'm not certain I agree with the interpretation. I'll need time to digest it. Still, brilliant, and wonderfully sensitive story.

• Wonder and Torture

  (#) Desolira 2008-03-08 04:59:04 PM

  This is wonderful. So insightful!
  It has the subtext that alot of fics out there are missing...
  
  The subtext that I try ever so hard to put into my own fics but never quite manage..and you've done it so perfectly.
  
  ^_^ I repeat- this is wonderful.
  

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