(#) writingechelon 2011-11-13This was...just wow.
I'm usually not that much of a fan of 'smutty' fics, but this one was just perfect. It wasn't vulgar at all and your style is great, too. It's poignant and simple, yet it manages to convey the image perfectly.
This is great work, keep it up!
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