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Playing With Padfoot
5 ReviewsWhen a little girl sprays a certain Black dog with a hose by accident, it sets off a chain of events that lets a lonely dog know just whats really important in life. I loved writing this story!
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Playing With Padfoot
(#) twilliams1797 2007-06-21 10:25:15 PM
I don't even have a dog and I think its great.. please do more! -
Playing With Padfoot
(#) Beregond5 2007-07-12 08:39:46 AM
That was absolutely adorable! I could really see that happening in the books too. Extra kudos for an original idea. :)
The only thing that seemed kinda off was the format: I'd prefer it if the paragraphs were a bit more clearly separated. It might makes things easier for the other readers.
Keep writing. :) -
Playing With Padfoot
(#) dave_gerecke 2008-04-19 06:35:08 PM
Very good.
Hope you continue to write.
dave