Categories > Anime/Manga > Naruto > Promise3 Reviews
Insects don't understand the concept of making promises, but they understand lies very well. [one shot]
- I'm reading through quite a few of your stories at the moment, I really like the way that your able to characterise the different individuals so well and are able to use original ideas and concepts.
Hinata's innocence and loyalty contrasted well with Shino's logic and calculation.
- Owch. Both Hinata and Shino are believable and heart-breaking. The clinical, gory details ("blood" + "esophagus" = eeek!) somehow make the scene even more poignant. I object slightly to Shino calling Hinata "weak," since he knows just how hard she tries (Exhibit A: the anime arc when she develops her ultimate defense jutsu, with Shino being the only one knowing), but if you're talking about a purely objective, skills-based sense, then it holds true. Anyways, nice job on an oft-ignored character.