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The shortest Severitus story ever

ONESHOT, PostOotP. Parody on Severitus and Independent!Harry stories. VERY short, practically joke format.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor, Parody - Characters: Dumbledore, Harry - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2005/11/26 - Updated: 2005/11/27 - 791 words - Complete

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• The shortest Severitus story ever

  (#) Ithilwen 2005-11-27 03:16:41 PM

  What the... Forgive me; I'm not quite a member of HP fandom. I suppose "Independant!Harry" means "Harry inexplicably hates Dumbledore for 'manipulating' him and resents him without mitigation from the closeness and trust that they once shared"? If not, then a heads-up might be nice.
  
  Hm... The ending could be stronger. Perhaps if Dumbledore's tracker were a bit more like Mrs. Weasley's clock, and we got a more vivid message than a "large amount of pain." Perhaps something like, "being squished by Gringotts vault," or "being squished into lunch for Gringotts Goblin Cafeteria." Heh heh.
  
  NITS:
  
  One turns over a "new leaf," but one gets a "new lease" on life.
  
  Did Lily "confine with" Dumbledore or "confide in" him?

• The shortest Severitus story ever

  (#) Katja 2007-01-04 03:44:37 PM

  Abso-bloody-lutely hilarious. Thank you.

• The shortest Severitus story ever

  (#) Chibeh 2007-05-25 11:00:50 PM

  @_@ I almost choked on popcorn. ER, NEVERMIND! Hahahaha.

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