(#) Rae_She_Writes 2007-06-24That was amazing, awesome, brilliant, beautiful, creative, clever, detailed, excellent, eerie (in a good way), fantastic, fabulous, great, happily ended, interesting,insightful, joyful(at the end, of course), Kompelling(I had no k words :( ), lovely, Masterminded, magnificent, neat, odd, perfect, quite a well thought out story (sorry, couldn;t think of a q word, give a girl a break), realistic, suspenseful,super, special, teriffic, undoubtedly one of the best I've read (again, not words with u that were posotive) VERY GooD!, wow-worthy, come on, x??, young and fresh, and no z words, sorry. But I tried. I loved this.
Rae gets married to Pete, how cute.
We shall all mourn Emma's passing.
Much love and props,
(#) ssketchator 2007-07-04Boo urns, Andrew should be beaten with a rubber chicken and hung by his toes in the basement of a meat packing plant. FOR LIFE.
But sweet ending. I like that he's not cocky or smooth about the proposal, that you kept him kind of stuttery straight through to the end.
I was super pleased with this. Rock on.
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