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Wishing
0 ReviewsGiving inanimate objects thoughts, feelings, and voices isn't always a good idea- especially if the objects are weapons. Rated for implied violence. (... Don't ask how it works. It just does.)
Sitting in its owner's hand,
The knife cries out for blood and flesh:
Yearning for the feeling of the
Life giving liquid flowing
Over its blue-metal blade;
Greedily imagines drinking in the fluid,
Tearing through the soft flesh
Of a creature;
Absolutely any creature;
Living or Dead.
It sits in his hand,
Wishing...
Wishing...
Wishing...
And it was granted its wish.
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A/N: Yet another eighth grade poem from two and a half years ago. And, surpise, surprise! Like all but one of my pieces (Bloody Melody), this was for a school assignment! We had to choose an object and personify it. 'Twas a bit awkward, since I didn't hear the fact that it was supposed to be about something in your ROOM... Yeeaah. Well, I liked how this turned out, but I'm not sure if it should be PG or PG-13. I chose the latter just to be safe, but...
Reviews are appreciated, especially since they let me know that someone's read my work.
The knife cries out for blood and flesh:
Yearning for the feeling of the
Life giving liquid flowing
Over its blue-metal blade;
Greedily imagines drinking in the fluid,
Tearing through the soft flesh
Of a creature;
Absolutely any creature;
Living or Dead.
It sits in his hand,
Wishing...
Wishing...
Wishing...
And it was granted its wish.
--
A/N: Yet another eighth grade poem from two and a half years ago. And, surpise, surprise! Like all but one of my pieces (Bloody Melody), this was for a school assignment! We had to choose an object and personify it. 'Twas a bit awkward, since I didn't hear the fact that it was supposed to be about something in your ROOM... Yeeaah. Well, I liked how this turned out, but I'm not sure if it should be PG or PG-13. I chose the latter just to be safe, but...
Reviews are appreciated, especially since they let me know that someone's read my work.
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