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Losing Control

by Shawniecat 1 Reviews

Clair in it for a bad week

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure - Characters: Dumbledore - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2007/06/30 - Updated: 2007/07/01 - 2618 words - Complete

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  • Harry Potter and the Curse of The Elemental

    (#) GryffindorDragon 2007-07-12 12:19:57 PM

    'even worse then Molly when she was here!' vs. 'not as worse as Molly was' -- so which is it? It can't be both. And it should be 'not as bad as Molly was'. Sometimes the grammar and spelling in this story need help.

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