Jins thoughts while watching Mugen and Fuu. (One Shot!)
(#) MooCow 2006-01-29 02:01:20 PMThat was beautiful :(. I loved it...the font, the spacing, the words that he said, the POV, oh it was wonderful. I really loved reading it and it was such an interesting topic. The only thing I could advice for something like this next time (or if you want to add more into this story) is to put more action in it..even though the words are touching some actions could make it even better.