"Please don't die, not now, not like this..."
i have no idea if the rating is correct being English and all. there is a referrence to violence but that's about all.
(#) emzah108 2007-07-06 01:11:26 PM
That was so touching...Lovely. Great job, I loved it.
(#) kassiepooh 2007-07-06 01:25:09 PM
i swear to god i was about to cry!
(#) wtfwhore 2007-07-06 01:32:28 PM
that was very very sad.
I thought when i read the summary it was going to be a feegee story. But i think this is so much better, and i'm glad i read it.
im glad you read it too haha how corny... but im glad you enjoyed it =) as much as you can enjoy a story about someone dying... =S
that;s some heavy stuff!
(#) Silvana 2007-09-20 12:35:44 PM
Why do you have to be so good at emotional stuff? huh? Making me feel bad like that. Good job.
hello my fellow english person! Good job, I swear to god I damn near cried, and I have a lump in my throat the size of a golf ball '~'
Aw thank you!
I'm sorry I [nearly] made you cry!