He never was a fighter, until she lay beside him, and gently whispered; "hope".
(#) ssketchator 2007-07-10 01:05:15 PM
Thank you for the end of the chapter, I don't know how I would have survived without a little humor.
I have never cried from reading a fanfic (simply because I'd feel like a raging dweeb) but this chapter brought me to tears. I think partly because tomorrow is the 10 month anniversary of the death of someone I love dearly, but also because you so perfectly captured Patrick's emotions. It wasn't too sobby, but it wasn't flippant. It was real, aching loss mixed with true love.
And this is why I idolize you.
(#) lonerstreet 2007-07-10 01:29:24 PM
love this chapter like all the others at frist it was sad but the ending was so funny i loved it. please update soon.
I wonder who's gonna help him come out of the closet... lolz jk. i know he's not gay... hahaha the closet!!!
(#) fobgal1 2007-07-10 03:36:27 PM
This is as amazing chapter. The part with Patrick at Amandas grave mad me melt.
Patrick is the sweetest man in the world lol.
And yay Petes baby is here. I just hope Josh doesnt get upset again.
Please update soon.
(#) ... 2007-07-10 05:34:54 PM
Wow. Just. Wow.
That made me so emotional.
Patrick is perfect. D:
(#) moodi-girl 2007-07-10 05:44:03 PM
That was amazing.
My sister kept giving me funny looks 'cause she didnt know why I looked sad.
Then she didnt know why I was laughing..closet..heehee
All I can say...I'm crying. Amazing!
sorry i missed you darling! i loved this and it was amazing!
(#) Emma 2007-07-12 06:53:06 AM
Woah what an emotional chapter. Truly loved every single word of it.
Well done on them getting Joe in the closet as well :)