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... into the fire
15 reviewsPete meets Phebe for the first time; it's time to come and get him. Dr. Morley finds the answer and Kirsh makes a bad, bad mistake. And the readers find out who Phebe is. ;)
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Her better half
(#) kitkatpwl 2007-07-13
Wow!!!
that was sooooo goood!!!!! Definetely DID NOT expect it!!!!
Great job!!! update soon!!! I wanna know what happens!Author's response
Thank you. I wanted to drop some hints, or at least little details that make it plausible when looking back, but not make it too obvious.Her better half
(#) XTinkerbellX 2007-07-13
Dude...seriously,I wouldn't even have guessed that he had multiple personalities.I think right now I'm trying to make sense of all that has happened so far....Author's response
Let me know if it works out. ;)Her better half
(#) my_famous_last_words 2007-07-13
DUDE OMG ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I EVER READ!
PETE'S HIS OWN STALKER! AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGG!>.> between you and I I'm not fond of Pete but this is just amazing. You've literally I can't explain it but wonderful!Author's response
Why, thank you. I tried hard so I'm glad to read you're enjoying it.
It's no secret that I am not necessarily fond Pete either but he's just too screwed in the head not to use him for these kind of stories. He's a very interesting character to write about. Maybe not to hang out with, but certainly to write about.Her better half
(#) LOVELA 2007-07-13
does happy dance
I totally KNEW it! I am so impressed with your knowledge into the psychological world! It was the headaches and time lapses that gave you away to me. There were other clues as well, but you know what they are you cleaver girl.
This was a brilliant story. I loved it all the way through. And not because I am a psych geek, but because you have a wonderful talent. Keep it up, dear!
Smooches!!!!Author's response
I dunno... but thank you, Nice Spice! :) Yes, the headaches and time lapses were why Dr. Morley figured it out. Plus how Phebe always managed to get past Hemmy and also why Moe didn't want to see Pete at all...
I am glad. Bring on the smooches!Her better half
(#) LOVELA 2007-07-13
One more thing...thanks for being up to date and refereing to his diagnosis as Disassociative Identity Disorder. That was even more impressive!Author's response
I thought you'd like that. ;)Her better half
(#) ryanrossISsove 2007-07-13
jesus christ, please don't tell me fuckface himself is really the crazy bitch?
if he really is, then i'm on team evie.
kill the boy.Author's response
It is Fuckface. Aha, well I noticed the votes on the poll changed slightly. ;)Her better half
(#) fob4ever 2007-07-13
ahah. omgosh. the reviews for this chapter are halarious. i never saw it coming. but in the begining of this chapter, i kinda saw what was going on. this is a great story! i can't wait for the end.Author's response
Yes, they are!
Thank you very much. I'll try to have the last chapter up sometime this weekend.Her better half
(#) FreakOfNature 2007-07-13
omg its Pete!? I would have never ever guessed. I totally love this story. please update once you got the ending. im sooo looking forward what happends. :-)Author's response
Of course, I will update soon. Thank you for you praise. :)
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