WARNING! THE AUTHOR IS SUFFERING FROM A VERY FOUL MOOD DUE TO ESSENTIALLY TWO WEEKS AWAY FROM THE COMPUTER WHILE THE RELATIVE FROM HADES WAS IN TOWN AND ENSCONCED IN THE SPARE BEDROOM (WHICH HOUSES...
- I like the story, you detail alot and well i like it and its original, i hope you continue with this story and at least add the Tri-Wizard Tournament
(#) LeprechaunJV 2008-02-21 08:56:06 AMInteresting story. Looking forward to it being updated.
(#) martindeshade 2008-09-13 02:20:15 AMIts a very moving story.
However it really needs a very good editor to condense certain sections, and split some of the very long paragraphs. You have to realize that very long paragraphs is hard to read especially on a computer. I find I have to highlight with the mouse every other 5 lines on a 10+ line paragraph.