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Loosing Ground With Every Passing Day

by loversintomonsters 3 Reviews

It's four am. My hand instinctively reaches over to feel for him only to feel a lack of body heat and an empty place designated for him.

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: G - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2007/07/16 - Updated: 2007/07/17 - 1721 words

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  • Loosing Ground With Every Passing Day

    (#) fobgal1 2007-07-16 08:08:24 PM

    Ok wow.
    This is very original.
    I love it so far.
    Please update soon.
  • Loosing Ground With Every Passing Day

    (#) MidnightBlue 2007-07-16 08:53:56 PM

    I applaud you.
    The beautiful poetic sense of descriptions draw me closer to each word as the sentences flow into place. Details are amazing and I'm at the edge of my seat hoping for another chapter. Please update soon.
  • Loosing Ground With Every Passing Day

    (#) FreakOfNature 2007-07-16 09:00:25 PM

    oh oh, i like it alot. its sad, and depressing, but i like it. please update soon. im adding this to my favorites
  • Loosing Ground With Every Passing Day

    (#) LOVELA 2007-07-16 11:37:04 PM

    Your words are very passionate and you were able to portray such a feeling that you made the reader feel as though they were standing in the narrator's shoes. I hope that you do write more in this story. It was very well written.
  • Loosing Ground With Every Passing Day

    (#) xxACoalminexx 2007-10-09 02:33:41 PM

    Amazing. You are really great at imagery. I love long, descriptive passages. Wonderful job. More soon?

    Author's response

    wow. i had forgotten about this story until your review.

    i love that you like to read long, descriptive passages.

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