It's four am. My hand instinctively reaches over to feel for him only to feel a lack of body heat and an empty place designated for him.
- Your words are very passionate and you were able to portray such a feeling that you made the reader feel as though they were standing in the narrator's shoes. I hope that you do write more in this story. It was very well written.
(#) xxACoalminexx 2007-10-09 02:33:41 PMAmazing. You are really great at imagery. I love long, descriptive passages. Wonderful job. More soon?
Author's responsewow. i had forgotten about this story until your review.
i love that you like to read long, descriptive passages.