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Reunion
5 Reviews"Scream" Universe. Harry is separated from Hermione. Sociopath/Harry! Violence and Gore
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Reunion
(#) Cateagle 2007-07-17 07:51:47 PM
Ouch!! Man, they really should just leave them alone and let them take care of the final round of "house cleaning" that'll leave the wizarding world with a fair shot at becoming a better place, but those who'd manipulate and coerce the old privileges back into place need removing. I'm not saying what they're doing is right or just, but sometimes it's just best to let a 'force of nature' such as they've become loose to take care of problems that aren't amenable to the tools available to civilized societies. -
Reunion
(#) grookill 2007-09-17 06:05:25 PM
Cateagle said it well, "Ouch!"
I think this "chapter" was better than "Smiling Man", but still not as good as "Scream."
I am beginning to think this series, as dark as it is, really needs a "romance" tag instead of "action/adventure". So much of the story is driven by how Harry and Hermione support each other and how they are really a single insane unit.
I think you need to write a companion piece to this chapter, from Hermione's perspective.
I feel bad about Kingsley, and I'm glad that the professor survived the encounter. I think "survived" is an appropriate term here. I'm pretty sure the professor will be scarred herself.
Good luck and I hope to see more of this series later. Maybe you ought to just have one entry and each current story be a chapter. It'll be easier for your fans to keep tabs on this.