“Someone’s gonna die tonight… you’d better choose wisely.”
Oh my god!
awesome, that was an amazing chapter
can't wait for the next as well :)
good start !
Wow, that was so cool! :D A little weird, yeah, but cool!!! =]
I can't wait to read more!!! It was a fantastic start to the story!!!
kinda weird, a little confusing, but I know it will clear up!
and I'm glad that I was on your review list!
even if I was the last one, but hey, whatever :D
I LIKE! I sure hope you update more often than you used to.
(#) lups 2007-09-21
so, you got me waiting, and first think i read is.... WHOA! o_O
i DEMAND and update ASAP XD
Wow! That was a great start! Very powerful...
I loved how you started mid-scene like that. It was very intense. I love the way you write. You dont give too much away, it just kinda sucks you in and you have no choice but to just go with it...
I cant wait to read the rest! Good job!----xoxo
"Have some composure
Where is your posture?
Oh, no, no
You're pulling the trigger
Pulling the trigger
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