Blinded at the age of four, Harry Potter only wants to lead a normal life with his family. On his eleventh birthday, he finds out that he can have anything but...
The bested of a headmaster, how could he give Neville Harry's fathers invisibility cloak... I hope Neville find the truth and give Harry the cloak back.
Oh dear, Harry's necklace seems evil to me.
I'm not too good with constructive and well thought out reviews. Some reviews are better done than the story. Not better than your story certainly.
I do want to thank you for posting your work and sharing your talent.
Wait is neville the chosen one? I'm really confused now. That's Harry's dad's Cloak!!!!
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