Blinded at the age of four, Harry Potter only wants to lead a normal life with his family. On his eleventh birthday, he finds out that he can have anything but...
- Oh dear, Harry's necklace seems evil to me.
I'm not too good with constructive and well thought out reviews. Some reviews are better done than the story. Not better than your story certainly.
I do want to thank you for posting your work and sharing your talent.