(#) katrina-anne 2007-09-27i think that you should change it to first person in elles pov
so we can see what shes thinking and stuff?
well great chapter anyway
cant wait for more
Author's responseYea thats what i wass thinking and i think i will do it but i might flick it to and fro every now and then but i will be sure to make it clear when i do! lol
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