Just a note.
This 'not chapter but just a note' is regarding some of your reviews concerning the points of view.
tragicWithACaptialT, you made the point that maybe I should stick to just the first person. I'm going to try that for the next chapter, though I may end up reverting back to third and first because I like the flexibility it gives me.
bindie611, you said I should say whose point of view it is from. The first person sections will always be from Joanna's point of view. Always. It's her story, her views, her way of telling it. And every time there is a line like so:
it means that Silvana is switching from third person into first or vice versa. She'd just like to thank you both for your comments and suggestions and she will bear these in mind.