So, why is Artemis still at St. Barleby's anyway?
(#) Bubbles 2006-01-31 07:26:26 AM
You have minor spelling issues, but it is a good story, all touchy and feely and stuff.
(#) Denouement 2006-06-12 02:51:09 PM
This was a really good story. I liked how you used the 'you' thing to involve the reader in the story. And the characterization was spot on.
The only problem that I noticed was that you spelled 'Nobel' (as in Alfred Nobel) as 'Noble'.
(#) Blesser 2006-06-28 10:20:32 AM
I thought it was absolutly wonderful, I hope to read more of your works in the future.
(#) vaiwandil 2006-09-18 02:35:50 PM
yeah how about an update as the story ist not completed?
I'd love to read on
(#) Silvana 2006-12-15 09:53:34 AM
Wow. this is one cool story.
(#) horsie890 2007-01-05 11:32:29 PM
I liked it, but I truly can't imagine Artemis Fowl ever letting his guard down like that. You made him seem like he was 10 or younger. Nevertheless, it WAS insightful.
(#) artyfowl3 2007-01-22 04:21:18 PM
Wow. I've never read a fic quite like that one before. I like it!
(#) ssokolow 2007-11-26 03:59:35 AM
Interesting use of 2nd-person perspective.
(#) keithlane 2010-06-01 02:40:45 PM
Wow. I love it :) I agree with Horsie890 a bit. I doubt he would have been that unguarded with anyone not willing to drink the same poison. But it was insightful nonetheless
(#) Hechu 2011-12-11 09:35:31 AM
I agree with horsie890 as I don't believe that Artemis would ever let his guard down. Then again we all can't be perfect even when we're geniuses. Artemis does have a weaker side he just hides it very well. I like how you made us we his history professor. it was interesting to read. I like the plot and it gives us an idea about Artemis. Interesting.
I like the part about "blood money"