The Shopping Center :: FicWad: fresh-picked original and fan fiction

Four teens decide to spend the night in a mall and end up shopping for terror.

Category: Horror - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Horror - Characters: - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2007/10/08 - Updated: 2007/10/08 - 3094 words - Complete

The Shopping Center

(#) Shank 2007-10-16 07:51:45 PM

interesting story and concept. original as well with not too much gore but enough to get the picture. only thing though is you need to build up suspense more. i know its supposed to get straight into action, but it seemed to be calm and jumping straight into action. well done though.

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