- Great story, pitty it's a one shot but definitly worth reading.
Author's responseI'm working an a longer treatment of the three tasks... my stumbling block is coming up with a more sensible approach to the 2nd... Though leaving ron and grabbing Hermione would seem to be the most logical.
(#) SpikeofDoom 2007-10-17Lol that was a pretty funny ending. it was well written for the 600 words you had me captivated :)
Author's responseIt came from the thought that if I knew I could talk to snakes, I would at least TRY to talk to anything with scales... It never hurts to ask.
(#) PuckSilverbreeze 2007-10-26Okay,
A. Love the Dragon Chat... Maybe in time Harry can become a dragon ally or childe or something.
B. Some of the most dangerous snakes love the water... Think about that for a bit
C. Definatly grab Hermione... I love H/HR fics
Author's responsea. Thought about that, but it seemed a bit much for a one shot.
b. Thought about that too, but none of them are native to Scotland, nor would they be capable of surviving for more than a few seconds in the waters of a Scotish lake in January, and even if Harry got them down jackets and ear muffs (it is a comedy) there isn't much they could have done against the chains that secured the hostages to the ground.
c. Of course grab Hermione. I always thought he was an idiot for even thinking about getting Ron.
Thanks for the review.
(#) GryffindorDragon 2007-11-07Very nicely done. You've got a nice sense of humor. But you could develop PuckSilverbreeze's idea into a chapter story. Don't you think a herd dragons arriving at Voldie's lair, crushing his hideout (a Ukranian Ironbelly atop Riddle Manor), toasting his Deaters, and swallowing him whole (sorry for the indigestion, Giver of Life; but that way the Horcruxes don't matter) is a much more satisfying scenario than a series of Archvillians and a bullet to the back of his head (though maybe not as humorous).
Author's responseAn interesting idea for a future story. I've got about 4 ideas on tap for when i finish what I've already got started, I'll make this one #5
- haha nice little ending there. yeh really really weird though i dont think harry would be all "giver of life" and stuff...i mean cmon this is harry your talkin' about! its not like hes gonna bow down to some mangy dragon like its his god or somethin right?
Author's responseIn my little world "giver of life" is parseltongue for mother...
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