- Definitely off to a good start here, esp. with setting the stage that long ago. I like what's there so far and that prophecy looks like it's going to kick and bite a lot of folk.
I'll offer my services as a beta should you still need one (and, yes, I can provide references if necessary).
Bravo!! for an attention-catching start.
Author's responseIf you want to do it I would appreciate it. Send me a reply and I'll send you the chapter as soon as I finish it.
(#) DrummerBoy4Life 2011-05-27I don't want to be the person that moans about this but... It has been awhile and the story looks so good, I was just wanting to ask whether you have gave up or not, or if you maybe rewrote it and I didn't notice.
I would really like to see this story continued because it has a brilliant plot and even from the small prologue you can tell that it will be well written.
Hope you come back to this story
P.S if you still want a beta I will be more than happy to do it.
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