I saw him lying there dead. Our life together flashed before my crying eyes, but at the same time anger filled my soul with the injustice of it all. After so much time, how could it end like this? ...
(#) stealacandy 2007-10-22 09:52:06 PMHey, this is not fair!
I thought Harry was dead, gone for good - will stay dead.
Coming back to life is stupid, and takes away from your story.
Granted, JKR did just that, but it's still stupid - as is JKR herself.
You should put a warning in the summary that this story is a DH-trap missing moment, and warn away all those who can't stand that rag.
Author's responseI appreciate the fact you took the time to review but I can't help but feel that you missed the point of the story.
It was meant to be a rant from Ginny post-war/post-7th book. It had little to do with Harry and more to do with Ginny's reflection on his actions.
I didn't mean to make it sound like he died and stayed dead, but if you read the entire descrpition it does in a way mention that he is still alive.
thanks for your time -PINKhairedLOVER