Ichigo's mind plays a nasty trick on him.
(#) gunsandpocky 2006-01-07 07:41:19 PMfacepaws i meant to hit "insightful" and managed to get "funny" instead. lucky it's that, too. i think what i liked best about it was the believable way the characters behaved - about the level of enlightened sophistication you'd expect from a pair of fifteen-year-olds. anyway. i thought it was great...
Author\'s Response: I found the respond link. head.desk
- Hey, Poe - it's pixee_led, from livejournal. I really loved the dialogue in this story. The outrage and frustration and embarrassment came through crystal clear. It made it so obvious how "tough" each one wants to be perceived and how fucking hard that is when you get all blushy about someone. ^_^
I look forward to reading more of your fics.
Author\'s Response: I found the respond link. head.desk My original response was done as a separate review, because (apparently) I'm an idiot. chuckle
(#) discordandnight 2006-01-08 09:27:46 AMHey Adrian, thanks for taking the time to read & review the fic. I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
Dialog is something that I enjoy working with and it’s (always) good to hear that I’ve succeeded in what I’ve attempted to do. smile
I look forward to writing more Ichi-Ishi; here’s to hoping my muse will stick around for the proverbial long haul. chuckle
Author\'s Response: Shit. I just found the 'Respond' link. head.desk
(#) tokageMusume 2006-03-22 06:35:52 PMI really like this story for a couple reasons.
1) Love the way you worked it into the manga. The join is all but seamless. I really love that -- if you love a story, you don't ever want to just plunder it. I like 'missing scenes' like this one very much.
2) Their mutual horror at discovering the attraction hits the perfect note, IMHO. They ARE fairly horrified; they're boys of a certain age and they're reacting right in character, I think. But, additionally cool -- the totally believable internal trip Ichigo takes towards acceptance. Very well done. Really damn fine.
Author's responseThank you [much], I'm happy that you enjoyed it, m'dear. grin