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The Undergdogs

'We are the outcasts. We are the broken. We are the helpless. We are the misfits.' First poem on here. Don't eat me.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2007/10/21 - Updated: 2007/10/21 - 309 words - Complete

Reviews

• The Undergdogs

  (#) Silvana 2007-10-23 01:24:15 PM

  You need to proof it, but that's really good.
  
  I am a freak, geek and nerd
  A history boff and music whore
  An invisible kid and a wild child
  One of the ones pushed aside.
  

  Author's response

  hehe wow if that was a response to my poem then that was awsome =D lol
  i read it through n changed the noticable errors... let me know if i missed any?

• The Undergdogs

  (#) Silvana 2007-10-28 07:17:05 AM

  Yeah that was a response. :P
  Just one error: We’re the ones who get sick to much.
  
  The to should be too...I think.
  Still an awesome fic.

  Author's response

  ahhhh yeah thank you! =)

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